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Andrew Taylor's avatar

I'm supposed to start work in four minutes but now I'm crying. Wonderful and beautiful. Forgiveness is so powerful, what an amazing way to show it.

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Asteria Geisterblum's avatar

I am only half sorry to hear that 🥹💛 literally the best compliment possible; the edge of the rooftop is so personal to me, I’m glad it’s resonating

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Lady Of The Lake's avatar

You are not supposed to make me cry on the bus. Asteria, this part made me feel so many things. It was incredible to experience the character’s emotions the entire time and to have glimpses into a life he has tried to bury. There was so much quiet acknowledgment and healing in this one. You touched my heart.

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Asteria Geisterblum's avatar

This one made me feel a lot while writing it as well 💛 it’s a somewhat personal one, I suppose, so I’m honoured it touched you that way 🥹

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Stephen Duffy's avatar

That was simply beautiful ❤️🥹

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Asteria Geisterblum's avatar

Thank you, glad you enjoyed it 💛

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Edward.Marlo.Ruiz's avatar

Another absolutely stunning and phenomenal piece of literature from you. This is bliss. An experience of the shop from the actual character was PERFECT. I’m in love with the Four-Fourty Four and what it does. This was so good, I FELT the ending with my heart. So human and with an arc that leaves you feeling the same way. Positivity gleaming in this one. Lovely.

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Asteria Geisterblum's avatar

Thank you so much! That’s such high praise I don’t even know what to say 🥹. It’s a very personal one for me, so that it left you with a positive feeling means a lot! Thank you

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