Orrin weaved through the narrow aisles of the cramped shop, brushing past shelves that seemed to lean in, equally curious about the new place the shop would soon settle into.
Not gonna lie, I was half expecting the cloaked figure to take Little Sir Menace, I actually held my breath! And when I realized what was really happening, I felt more relieved than sympathetic toward Orrin, LOL. Can’t wait to see what happens next!
But that last line though 👏👏👏 I literally said 'whoa' out loud... and it really got me thinking.
I’m absolutely thrilled to learn that you enjoyed it, thank you so much. I suppose, when having the choice between Little Sir Menace and Orrin, I’d pick Little Sir Menace, too.
I’m glad you liked the last line! It took me most of the time to come up with an ending that fits the others.
Not gonna lie, I was half expecting the cloaked figure to take Little Sir Menace, I actually held my breath! And when I realized what was really happening, I felt more relieved than sympathetic toward Orrin, LOL. Can’t wait to see what happens next!
But that last line though 👏👏👏 I literally said 'whoa' out loud... and it really got me thinking.
I’m absolutely thrilled to learn that you enjoyed it, thank you so much. I suppose, when having the choice between Little Sir Menace and Orrin, I’d pick Little Sir Menace, too.
I’m glad you liked the last line! It took me most of the time to come up with an ending that fits the others.
I must say you've done well… looking forward to the next chapter!